Feedback from teachers

From today's lesson we gained feedback from our teachers to help with the progress in filming. We realised that we needed dialogue during the end, so in our re-shots we are going to make Charli say something like: "Who are you?" or if she does know Luke: "What are you doing?!" This is shape the meaning of our film and add narrative too. We also need to re-shot the shots of Luke walking up the stairs as we feel if he didn't wear socks, it would make an impression to the audience that he is cold blooded. With our new footage we also need to organise when the teachers can film. We also need to work out whether we want to include the newspaper, so this means will have to either re-shot or add certain shots of Luke discarding the newspaper.